“Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, being a mother stood up one step forward than being a
father
. Being a parent in this
century might look little
selfish to you. What about Correct article usage
a little
for
your significant other? Did you ask your partner if he/she want to become a parent before getting pregnant or after you found out you are going to have a Change preposition
apply
baby
? In this
essay
I will argue the statement Add a comma
,essay
with
both ways and Change preposition
in
examples
.
On one hand, I have seen a lot of divorce scenes in Change preposition
with examples
this
my mortal life as a family law attorney. Some cases was
really extraordinary and I would like to share one of them with you. I had a Change the verb form
were
client
who got pregnant with a man who is already married. The man in the story wanted an affair but not serious
relationship. My Add an article
a serious
client
wanted to
Change preposition
apply
a
mother so she can take Add a missing verb
be a
advantages
Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
from
Change preposition
of
baby’s
Correct article usage
the baby’s
father
. In the court, we declared that father
has to Correct article usage
the father
involved
with Add a missing verb
be involved
baby’s
stipends and special days. Correct article usage
the baby’s
Also
, my client
asked if she can get some money for herself too. But Supreme Court said
“Your(Add the punctuation
,said
Client
) intention was not innocent so the biological father
of the baby
does not have to be involved anything
Change preposition
in anything
to
with her.” In Change preposition
apply
this
case, we saw that we cannot force anyone to do stuff.
On the other hand
, in Islam even though many people does
not know your male partner can not force you to have a Change the verb form
do
baby
. It is forbidden to force female
Correct article usage
a female
partner
. Fix the agreement mistake
partners
Its
coming directly from the Almighty. Replace the word
It's
It is
Hence
, if he wants to have a baby
and she gives birth, he has to take care of the baby
and the wife. For
example
if the wife asks for Add a comma
,example
housekeeper
and a Add an article
a housekeeper
the housekeeper
baby sitter
for the Correct your spelling
babysitter
baby
the husband has to provide. As a Muslim and as woman
, Correct article usage
a woman
this
is the most beautiful part of the religion.
In conclusion, we can not urge anyone to do anything especially when it comes to have
a Change the verb form
having
baby
. I think women have to right in their hands to become a parents
and raise them but only if their intention is good.Correct the article-noun agreement
parents
a parent
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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