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Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Over the few decades running the business pattern had changed dramatically most of the meetings and practice wear organized online.
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, there are several pros and cons of that, In
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 essay, I would highlight why the benefit is more. There are several advantages of online services,
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, it benefits the company and individual economy, which helps the Institute progress.
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, Some companies had protocols to organize accommodation
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 tickets too for the manpower
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 going to meetings ,
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, some officers have to give from their own pockets.
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, internet meetings can reduce expenditure.
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, there would be flexibility in the time. Sometimes there would be difficult to travel
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time - zone and personal problems.
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, there are some cons too, sometimes the training is too long and they have to finish within a short period so they have to spend all their time on the screen which can affect their health.
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, a recent study shows that most dry eyes syndrome is caused by overused
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screens.
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 the internet issues and the home ,
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 they can face the problem which caused delays.
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, some trainers and officers have small children which can come during training and disturb them. In conclusion, there are a few disadvantages, if we overcome them, it helps to run the company more economy and smoothly.
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