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Countries should try to produce all the food and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every nation has its own set of strength in what they produce from the resources they have.Nations should be self-sufficient in terms production of
food
 and should be less dependent on other
countries
.
This
 essay will argue why it is important for the
country
 to grow most of their own
food
instead
 of importing
food
. There are many potential reasons why
countries
 should produce their meal. Local
food
 will be less affordable so
that
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everyone can buy that bread and eat it.When
food
 is imported transport cost is
also
 paid by the consumer which will make nutrition more expensive than if it is produced locally.In Pakistan cooking oil is imported and way more expensive than in Indonesia because in Indonesia
this
 is produced locally than in Pakistan.Traditionally for many ,nations it is shame that their feed is coming from other
countries
 they have self-doubt the whole nation can't even produce their own
food
.There are many reasons that
food
 should be produced locally. From the state's security point of ,view it is
also
 important to produce
food
 locally
instead
 of importing from other
countries
.If any
country
 goes to war and they can not import
food
 for any reason what will happen if the state is dependent on other
countries
 for the question would how many days people of the
country
 can survive on the
food
 stock? what will happen whole
food
 reserve is consumed? that's why it is important from a national security point of view,
on the other hand
, it is
also
 essential any natural disaster has occurred for any reason
country
 can get
food
 from other
countries
.
To sum up
,It is beneficial economically and from the national security point too that the
country
 should produce its own
food
 because the whole nation can not rely on others to feed them
although
 they will pay.other will be not there in though time and sometimes it is not even possible so every
country
 should grow their own
food
.
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