Many people think that the world should speak one language, others argue that countries should have its own languages.  Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some
people
argue that a universal
language
should be spoken all over the world
while
others believe to maintain the originality of the dialect in any
countries
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. For others, having
a
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uniformity in the
language
spoken is important for better understanding.
Nevertheless
, the uniqueness of the different languages would preserve the culture of the nation. I believe, speaking in
one
language
is vital to all mankind for effective communication. Many individuals think that preserving their own languages is an aspect of a unique identity of a country.
People
conserve the
distintiveness
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distinctiveness
of the different dialects because it signifies the traditions and customs.
Moreover
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language
is a form of art that could
be pass
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down to the next generation.
For example
, in the
Philippine's
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different dialects are being integrated as part of the school curriculum to inculcate in the young minds and
heart
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of the students.
This
measure is rigorously
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to preserve the heritage culture.
However
, I believe speaking
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one
language
promotes harmonious
relationship
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relationships
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among nations.
On the other hand
, having
one
language
is important because it is a way to communicate with other
people
. Other
people
think
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if all mankind speaks and writes
same
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word
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it would create a peaceful world.
Apart from
this
, speaking
same
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language
would result in
an
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effective work performance.
For example
, working as an expatriate nurse in
the
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hospital with different nationalities and the essence of speaking English would promote success rate in managing the patient. In conclusion, others think speaking a diverse
language
would preserve the culture of the
people
speaking it whilst some argue
one
language
is crucial for an efficient conversation
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other
people
in the world.
Whereas
, I believe that it is
more
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essential for all
people
to speak in
one
language
for
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and smooth conversation.
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