It has recently announced that a new restuarant may be built in your neighborhood: Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasona and detail to support your answer.

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Some people believe that

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a restuarant

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restaurant

will

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their

privency

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someway

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while

some argue that

this

new

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restaurant

strategy can

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various benefits

for

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community

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the community

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. My reason why I encourage

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and some details to support my

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will be elaborated on

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essay.

To begin

with,

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restaurants

or fine

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places can be a prime stimulation to our economy, leading to optimistic consequences

such

as vibrant environments and new connections in town.

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, not only people will have more options

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their

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but

also

bring about

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individuals in your area which help your

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to be more sociable.

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, I strongly support

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this

future plan. With

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regard

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to, the prime instances of advantage from new

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restaurant

in town which is divided into 2 sectors.

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, in terms of

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part,

this

will lead our communities to be one of the most interesting

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districts

for foodie person or a famous location for

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Lastly

, in terms of individual benefit, the

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to increase their income from

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plan. Take a parking lot service

for instance

; if your property is

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the new

restuarant

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restaurant

, you can offer the parking area for them by rental and earn income monthly, and another example is public restroom service

that

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where

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neighbor

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can gain benefit from the new

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restuarant

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restaurant

. From

this

perspective, it is

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that people in our communities can reap great benefits from a new

restuarant

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restaurant

in town in different ways. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that a new

restuarant

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restaurant

will not

be benefit

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directly

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individuals but communities can gain optimistic consequences

some

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in some

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way. I strongly support

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apply

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this

project in order to build a vibrant community for living.

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