It has recently announced that a new restuarant may be built in your neighborhood: Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasona and detail to support your answer.

Some people believe that
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restuarant
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restaurant
will
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their
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privacy
in
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,
while
some argue that
this
new
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strategy can
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various benefits
for
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community
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. My reason why I encourage
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and some details to support my
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will be elaborated on
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essay.
To begin
with,
restuarant
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restaurants
or fine
dinner
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places can be a prime stimulation to our economy, leading to optimistic consequences
such
as vibrant environments and new connections in town.
For example
, not only people will have more options
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their
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but
also
bring about
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individuals in your area which help your
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to be more sociable.
Therefore
, I strongly support
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this
future plan. With
regrad
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regard
regards
to, the prime instances of advantage from new
restuarant
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restaurant
in town which is divided into 2 sectors.
Firstly
, in terms of
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economy
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part,
this
will lead our communities to be one of the most interesting
distict
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district
districts
for foodie person or a famous location for
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.
Lastly
, in terms of individual benefit, the
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able
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to increase their income from
this
plan. Take a parking lot service
for instance
; if your property is
near by
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the new
restuarant
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restaurant
, you can offer the parking area for them by rental and earn income monthly, and another example is public restroom service
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neighbor
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can gain benefit from the new
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restuarant
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restaurant
. From
this
perspective, it is
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that people in our communities can reap great benefits from a new
restuarant
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restaurant
in town in different ways. In conclusion,
although
it is undeniable that a new
restuarant
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restaurant
will not
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directly
to
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individuals but communities can gain optimistic consequences
some
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way. I strongly support
on
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this
project in order to build a vibrant community for living.
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