Task 1: The maps below show the organisation of a bookstore in 2000 and now

Task 1: The maps below show the organisation of a bookstore in 2000 and now
The maps illustrate how the structure of a
bookstore
has changed from 2000 until now.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that the
bookstore
witnessed a significant modernization. One notable feature is the appearance of more amenities to satisfy customer's
need
Fix the agreement mistake
needs
show examples
. Looking at the map, we can see that there was no alteration to the location of the
bookstore
's entrance. On top of that ,books related to art, hobbies and cookery had been removed from the middle of the
bookstore
to merge with the fiction one, with the aim of making room for more tables for people to read books, which is much more convenient.
In addition
, the fiction book located in the right corner had been replaced by non-fiction
instead
.
While
travel, new books and desk service kept intact over the period shown, the non-fiction book had been erected to build a cafe shop in order to gain more income for the owner of the
bookstore
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bookstore with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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