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Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.

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These days, a large number of young
people
 tend to have more interest in international celebrities rather than historical figures in their country.
this
 essay will present several causes of
this
 trend
as well as
 the appropriate solutions to improve
this
 situation. There are several reasons why young
people
 nowadays know more about international stars
instead
 of having great knowledge about the famous
people
 in their host nation in the past.
To begin
 with, it results from social media, which contributes to the growing interest of young
people
 in celebrities. It is common to notice that famous
people
's lives are grabbing the headlines of the majority of the newspaper, especially online ones.
In addition
 to that, young
people
 spend most of their spare time online, they can easily come across to that posts or articles, which boosts their
fascinated
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 about
such
 topics.
Furthermore
, another possible cause of
this
 trend is
due to
 the tedious
history
 lessons at school. It seems that
history
 lessons are getting more and more unattractive because of the teaching methods, which leads to the fact that students are not excited about
this
 subject anymore. Some feasible solutions can be adopted to make more young
people
 interested in
history
 and historical
people
. First of all,
film-makers
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filmmakers
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 should be encouraged to produce more movies based on
historical
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a historical
the historical
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event
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events
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. It would be more intriguing if there were any participation of the hot stars, which will more or less attract the young's attention.
Therefore
, they will gain deeper knowledge about
history
 in a relaxing way.
Secondly
, teachers should apply more technology advanced in their teaching to arouse student's
interests
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.
Instead
 of teaching merely a long list of names and dates in textbooks, teachers can add more videos,
motion
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and motion
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 images to create more appealing lessons. In conclusion, albeit most teenagers now do not pay much attention to
the
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historical figures for some
reasons
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reason
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,
this
 problem can
also
 be dealt
with
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with with
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 these suggested solutions above.
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