The charts illustrate the participants in the olympics by gender and by totals
The bar
graph
compares the proportion of male and female Olympic participants , over a 90-year time period. while
the line graph
presents the total amount of athletes
who participated in the Olympics
from 1924 to 2014 .
In general , both charts accounted for a dramatic increase in their rating ; where women who participated in the Olympics
rose to 5000 last
year and the same trend can be seen on the line graph
too .
To be specific , 3000 men competed in the Olympics
in 1924 whereas
, for the opposite sex it was below a minority and the same trend was followed for the past 30 years which was 4500 for males while
for females it was below 1000 . However
, in 1984 participants for women reported a moderate increase in their rating , which made up approximately 2000 whereas
, for ,men it was a little above 5000. Surprisingly , women reported a significant climb in their participant ratio which was 5000 . Meanwhile, for
,males had 1000 Change preposition
apply
athletes
compared to the opposite sex .
The line graph
shows that the total number of participants in the Olympics
was considerably low in the initial year , with 4000 athletes
. However
, in 1954 it accounted for a moderate climb in their proportion which reached around 6000 . But , after 60 years the ratio of athletes
in the Olympics
has risen dramatically and reached a peak of 1000 in 2014 .Submitted by varshajose345 on
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