The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The multiple bar chart illustrated data about five different Australian cities, regarding drinking and buying habits of tea and
coffee
in the previous four weeks.
Overall
, the
percentage
of people who went to cafes was equal and highest in both Melbourne and Hobart, which is
also
comparable to Sydney.
While
in Adelaide and ,Brisbane comparatively fewer citizens visited cafes. To start with, in Brisbane 34% of the public purchased fresh
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks, which was nearly equal to the proportion in Adelaide.
Whereas
, the
percentage
of instant
coffee
buyers was between 50 and 55% in both of these cities. In ,Sydney approximately 62% of residents went to cafes. Among ,them 45% were instant
coffee
buyers and 43% were fresh
coffee
buyers, in the
last
four weeks.
By contrast
, a high
percentage
of people visited restaurants in Hobart and Melbourne, almost 63%. In both cities, the proportion of instant
coffee
consumers was 53% and 48% respectively,
while
for fresh
coffee
,consumers the
percentage
was 38% in Hobart and 42% in Melbourne.
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