The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The multiple bar chart illustrated data about five different Australian cities, regarding drinking and buying habits of tea and
coffee
in the previous four weeks.
Overall
, the percentage
of people who went to cafes was equal and highest in both Melbourne and Hobart, which is also
comparable to Sydney. While
in Adelaide and ,Brisbane comparatively fewer citizens visited cafes.
To start with, in Brisbane 34% of the public purchased fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks, which was nearly equal to the proportion in Adelaide. Whereas
, the percentage
of instant coffee
buyers was between 50 and 55% in both of these cities. In ,Sydney approximately 62% of residents went to cafes. Among ,them 45% were instant coffee
buyers and 43% were fresh coffee
buyers, in the last
four weeks.
By contrast
, a high percentage
of people visited restaurants in Hobart and Melbourne, almost 63%. In both cities, the proportion of instant coffee
consumers was 53% and 48% respectively, while
for fresh coffee
,consumers the percentage
was 38% in Hobart and 42% in Melbourne.Submitted by areejiqbal437 on
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