The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
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The multiple bar chart illustrated data about five different Australian cities, regarding drinking and buying habits of tea and
coffee
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in the previous four weeks.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of people who went to cafes was equal and highest in both Melbourne and Hobart, which is
also
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comparable to Sydney.
While
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in Adelaide and ,Brisbane comparatively fewer citizens visited cafes. To start with, in Brisbane 34% of the public purchased fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4 weeks, which was nearly equal to the proportion in Adelaide.
Whereas
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, the
percentage
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of instant
coffee
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buyers was between 50 and 55% in both of these cities. In ,Sydney approximately 62% of residents went to cafes. Among ,them 45% were instant
coffee
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buyers and 43% were fresh
coffee
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buyers, in the
last
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four weeks.
By contrast
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, a high
percentage
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of people visited restaurants in Hobart and Melbourne, almost 63%. In both cities, the proportion of instant
coffee
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consumers was 53% and 48% respectively,
while
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for fresh
coffee
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,consumers the
percentage
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was 38% in Hobart and 42% in Melbourne.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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