ou and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: To Whom it May Concern,

#ou #country #work #house #property #agent #type #accommodation #hope #location #addresses #concern

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jenny Rose and I am from Spain. I recently got a confirmation about my permanent residency in Canada and wish to relocate there with my family, by the end of May,

this

year. I have my husband Mr John Rose and 1 kid, who is 7 years old. I am looking to find a rental apartment which 2 bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom if a drawing room would be available

along with

rooms that would be great.

Besides

, I would prefer an apartment in the countryside rather than some hustling and bustling city.

However

, that would be great if it would be in close proximity to a school, hospital, bus and railway station so that we would not face any issues with commuting to our work. Please quote me with the availability as per my preference and prices. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Jenny Rose

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

155 words

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