Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear Sir, My name is Jenny Rose and I am supposed to join your organization within one month I.e., from the first week of June.

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, I would like to bring to your attention something imperative which is hindering me to join on that day and would request your help to get my joining date extended. Now, let me explain what happened, actually, the CEO of my current organization is visiting our office in the same week and I was assigned to give him a presentation on the tasks I have completed so far and what improvements I brought to the project I am working on. As I am the one working on that project, so no one would be able to explain it better,

hence

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; I have to take up

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responsibility and I do not want to get back from it as

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company provided me with great learning opportunities. It would be a matter of just two more weeks and would request you extend my joining date until

then

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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jenny Rose

kaurmamta3

Feb 22, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

182 words

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Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

Do you agree with gun possession in public to protect lives ?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a life without that technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in the museums. Nowadays information is freely available on the internet so there is no need for museums. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.