The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The line graph compares how many stores were shut down and the number of shops that started launching in a nation over a 7-year period from 2011 to 2018. In the overview,
it is clear that
the proportions of the openings saw a dramatic decrease in 2018 and the closures fluctuated throughout the years.
Firstly
, in 2011, the numbers of closures were around 6400 compared to 8500 openings. The marts that were shut down went up by 700 in the next two years
while
the launchings decreased dramatically and recovered by 4000 in 2014. In 2014, the points were nearly the same with 6100 and 6200 respectively with a slight difference of 100. After that, the number of shops that were closed reached a bottom of around 900 in 2015 and there was an upward trend in 2016 and finished at around 5200 in 2018.
On the other hand
, the number of stores that were launched dropped to 4500 in 2015 and remained stable till 2017 with around 4100 and ended up at 3000 in 2018.
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