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```Many people think that the world should speak one language, others argue that countries should have its own languages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some
people
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 argue that using a universal
language
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 is better than maintaining the nation's unique dialect. It is discussed that one
language
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 makes
communication
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 easy.
In contrast
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, the uniqueness of
country's
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language
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 preserves
their
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its
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 culture. I believe that using a universal
language
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 is most important in effective
communication
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. Many individuals think that preserving a
language
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 signifies uniqueness.
People
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 used their own
language
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 to conserve their traditions and customs.
Moreover
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,
language
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 is a form of art
that is
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 conveyed to the following generation.
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, the Philippines curriculum uses their mother tongue in teaching their pupils.
However
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, I believe a unified
language
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 promotes harmonious relationships among nations.
On the other hand
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, having one
language
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 is important because it will not lead to confusion in communicating with other nations. Other
people
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 think that if all mankind speaks and writes the same vernaculars it would create a peaceful world.
Apart from
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this
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, speaking the same
language
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 would result in
an
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effective work performance.
For example
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, working as an expatriate nurse in a hospital
together with
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 different nationalities
while
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 using English as a means of
communication
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 would promote success rate in managing the patients. In conclusion, others think that diversity in the
language
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 would preserve the culture of the
people
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while
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 some argue that a universal
language
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 is more efficient in conversing with other
people
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 in the world.
Whereas
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, I believe that it is essential for all
people
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 to speak one
language
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 for easy and smooth
communication
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.
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