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Some people think that companies and individuals, rather than the government, should pay for cleaning up the pollution that they have produced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, more and more
pollution
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 is generated, and it is commonly cleaned up and paid for by the
government
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, but some
people
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 argue that
pollution
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 producers, organizations or
people
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, should pay for it. I completely disagree with
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 idea, because
this
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 practice is expensive, and it is the authority's responsibility. On the one hand, the public should not pay extra cleaning
fees
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 for their normal
pollution
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. Because there are several reasons.
Firstly
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, companies and individuals have to produce some
pollution
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 during
the
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 daily run and life, which is unavoidable.
In addition
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,
pollution
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 has a massive number of types that are extremely hard
statistics
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 and calculated. The
government
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 needs to employ additional staff to generate correct data for
fees
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, which is not worth it because those
costs
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 can deal with a lot of
pollution
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.
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, if it is executed that most
people
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 pay for cleaning, they will equivalently pay extra tax, which is to raise everyone's living
costs
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.
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, the cleaning obligation should be undertaken by authorities. In modern society, everyone needs to be taxed. That money normally includes the cost of the
government
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, who should provide public service to the public.
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 if there is some serious environmental damage caused by someone, the
government
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 will punish those who will pay extra
fees
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 through existing laws. So that the public
do
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 not worry about unfairly sustaining extra
pollution
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costs
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. Daily range
pollution
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 cleaning
costs
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 have been included in taxes, which can improve social running efficiency
though
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through
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 the
government
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's unified resource allocation. In conclusion,
it is clear that
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people
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 already pay for cleaning
pollution
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fees
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 through taxes, and it is not worth calculating everyone's
pollution
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.
Therefore
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, I disagree with some
people
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's idea that the public should pay extra for what they produce
pollution
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.

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