You recently did a short cookery course the cookery school has ask for your feedback on this course Write a letter to the course director at cookery school in your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Sahi how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you like the school to offer

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. In
this
letter, I would like to describe all the activities which
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liked during the cookery course. I enjoy cooking Chinese dishes the most because I had
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the curiosity
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to learn something out of the box. After the cookery show,
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try different dishes at home every day. I usually make food on special occasions
as well as
during weekends for my parents.
Last
month, there was my sister's birthday and she invited her friends and some relatives
also
. I made Punjabi
as well as
some Chinese food for them. I want to request you to arrange another cookery course soon,
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really want to take part again and love to learn something new again. My sister
also
wants to take part
this
time. We will be thankful to you. Yours affectionately, Gagan.
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