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There are large differences in attendance by children in primary and secondary
schools
between industrialised and developing countries
. Children in the least developed countries
were significantly less likely to attend these schools
than those in more developed and industrialised countries
. The biggest differences came between secondary school
enrollments for girls
. Only 26% in the least-developed countries
were enrolled in secondary school
, while
92% in industrialised countries
were. Coming in somewhere between these two extremes, in other developing countries
, 49% of girls
were enrolled in secondary schools
.
The smallest difference in attendance was in primary school
enrollments by boys
. 71% of boys
in the least developed countries
, 88% of boys
in other developing countries
and 95% of boys
in industrialised countries
attended primary school
.
Enrollment by girls
in primary schools
was similar to these figures and enrollment by boys
in secondary schools
was similar to the figures for girls
in secondary schools
. Generally, those children living in the poorest countries
seem to be least likely to attend primary and secondary school
.Submitted by formaggio124 on
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