Should governments make decision about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

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history,

people

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wanted to become more independent from their governments which were usually ruled by one person.

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, today we have more rights compared to any time before.

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, many

people

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still argue that they need more

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. Personally, I think that we have to share some part of our

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with governments to live better in peace. On the one hand,

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countries should not be ruled by

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having absolute power.

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leads to corruption, slow development and many other problems.

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, we could compare living and business conditions in countries with and without democracy. When

people

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have a right to vote and change the situation, authorities will not be able to ruin the situation in the

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country

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, we should not go too far. The problem here is that for some

people

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freedom

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means doing whatever they want. What I think is that it is impossible to live together in society and not

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any rules.

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, If humans could do whatever they want, they would rob, kill and do everything which will benefit them no matter what will be with others. In conclusion, I consider that governments should make some decisions about our

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lives

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and make us follow the law. If they did not do it, we would live in

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chaos and never get

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peacful

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peaceful

and developing world. In my opinion,

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is when you have independent courts,

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rights

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fear

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your own government.

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Should governments make decision about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

Your opinion

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