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Some people think that governments should provide subsidies to farmers to produce cheap healthy food. Others think that governments should tax companies producing unhealthy foods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #governments #subsidies #farmers #food #tax #companies #foods
It is true that the regimens have to provide
wellfare
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welfare
 living
standart
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standards
standard
 to their citizens. Some individuals consider that
for
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taking care of revolutionizing
farming
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the farming
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 industry and producing more affordable foods is
responsible
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the responsible
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the
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 government,
however
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 other people advocate that
due to
 procurement many of
unappropriate
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inappropriate
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 nutritions the companies must be punished. In
this
 essay, the reasons to support my agreement with
this
 view will be presented before my conclusion is reached.
To begin
 with,
farming
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 and agricultural industry is
a
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 backbone of the community. So, if the country tends to bring a numerous of nutritions which import from other nations, during the economic recession the cabinet would lose
the
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control
adjusting
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of adjusting
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on
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food prices.
Therefore
, subsidizing farmers can be increased home production. As
,
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 a result of
this
 economic planning can help to reduce
commiting
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commuting
 from outside of
country
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the country
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. On the flip side, producing unhealthy foods are a real pitfall
to
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community
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the community
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. İf the
manufactures
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manufacturers
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 tend to reduce the quality of production and commodities in
oder
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order
 to endeavour to attain more profit, the government would implement some protocols. Higher taxes are
very
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 tough
precoution
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precaution
. From my point of view,
after
this
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implementation
implemtation
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 the companies would
obliged
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 to only operate
for
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 the interests of publicity.
Hence
, people would have a chance to get more affordable and qualified commodities in the
grocieres
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groceries
. In conclusion, both implementations have some merits,
however
, subsidizing
to
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farming not only increases
production
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the production
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 environment
,
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 but
also
 would contribute to
reduce
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reducing
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unemployment
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the unemployment
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 ratio.
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