An increasing number of people is buying one they need on the internet. What are the advantages and the disadvantages for both individuals and company shopping online

Nowadays, online shopping has become so popular among

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and individuals who are using

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method. In the following

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and demerits of

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with, folk who go online to get their needs

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, online shoppers can save much time

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of visiting more places to get what they need, they simply could do it by a press of a button,

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, avoiding traffic jam in seasons.

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, in Egypt people use to go shopping more in religious seasons,

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the roads

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full of cars at these times of

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individuals seeking online ways rather than the traditional ways of shopping.

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, some products are not available sometimes in markets,

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finding it online would be easy for customers,

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, some folks want to buy a

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product from outside they do not have to travel if they could order it by the internet.

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, individuals would be exposed to

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by online scammers,

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some fake websites are cheating and stealing people’s money by creating fake discounts and advertisements. For

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, giant firms like Amazon would not be expanded and made

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famous.

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Amazon now is in every spot in the world,

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make massive profits by selling their products online,

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in Saudi Arabia statistics say that nowadays online shop markets have made profits more than regular shops,

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they need logistical support to reach more customers, they do not need regular workers to sell their product.

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, some costs are rising

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need marketing specialists and online developers

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salaries are more than regular employees,

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competition now between shops to attract online shoppers

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in Saudi Arabia hundreds of shops are existing now using websites for their business. In conclusion,

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trend has advantages and disadvantages for both people and

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is up to each one of them