An increasing number of people is buying one they need on the internet. What are the advantages and the disadvantages for both individuals and company shopping online

Nowadays, online shopping has become so popular among

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a result of

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trend some advantages and disadvantages could happen to both

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and individuals who are using

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method. In the following

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I am going to discuss

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and demerits of

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To begin

with, folk who go online to get their needs

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would find some benefits of

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,

firstly

, online shoppers can save much time

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of visiting more places to get what they need, they simply could do it by a press of a button,

moreover

, avoiding traffic jam in seasons.

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, in Egypt people use to go shopping more in religious seasons,

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a result of

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the roads

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full of cars at these times of

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,

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individuals seeking online ways rather than the traditional ways of shopping.

Secondly

, some products are not available sometimes in markets,

thus

finding it online would be easy for customers,

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, some folks want to buy a

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product from outside they do not have to travel if they could order it by the internet.

On the other hand

, individuals would be exposed to

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by online scammers,

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some fake websites are cheating and stealing people’s money by creating fake discounts and advertisements. For

companies

, giant firms like Amazon would not be expanded and made

this

uproar without using online strategies, if it were a regular shop in a city, it would not have

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famous.

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Amazon now is in every spot in the world,

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make massive profits by selling their products online,

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in Saudi Arabia statistics say that nowadays online shop markets have made profits more than regular shops,

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they need logistical support to reach more customers, they do not need regular workers to sell their product.

On the other hand

, some costs are rising

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time, because these

companies

need marketing specialists and online developers

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salaries are more than regular employees,

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, there is

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competition now between shops to attract online shoppers

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in Saudi Arabia hundreds of shops are existing now using websites for their business. In conclusion,

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trend has advantages and disadvantages for both people and

companies

, and counting

this

is up to each one of them