You have bought a ticket for a live concert (music program) but cannot attend it. so you decided to offer the ticket a friend. write a letter to him/her and say -give details about a concert explain -why you would not be able to attend the concert -suggest how your friend will receive the ticket.

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Dear Ravi I am ecstatic to offer a free ticket for a live concert which will be held on Sunday at 8PM on 10th Street in New West city. I am sure you will be thrilled to watch

this

live

show

since it will be on weekend at night time. In fact, I booked

this

reservation much before despite my busy schedule at the workplace and right now I cannot make it to attend the

show

as I have got a super duper urgent request from my employer and I did not even think of it in my dream that missing the long waited

show

on the weekend. As you know, I have back-to-back meetings

hence

, I may not come down and hand over the ticket.

Therefore

, I would request you to please come to my home and collect the ticket.

In addition

, I would extremely happy to come to your office in the morning let me know if

this

works for you. If not I will send it through speed post and drop your home address

along with

the postal code. please do not think of postel changes and everything is on me and I feel like giving a gift to my younger brother. I am sure that you will get unlimited fun over there and drinks too. Have a good time and mesmerizing memories throughout the

show

. Best regards Lakshmi

Submitted by lakshma999 on Thu Feb 23 2023

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