The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
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The circle graphs illustrate the percentage of common free-time activities based on a survey in the EU among grown-up people in 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, the first graph is divided into 5 proportions
while
the second has 6 different parts. It is apparent that the Watching TV figure was the largest one in both.
To begin
with, Watching television was the most preferred activity in 1985, accounting for 32% and followed by talking with friends and eating out respectively 21% and 23%, which was summarily almost half of the chart. Following, compared Watching TV to Talking with family, the former was more than nearly two times the latter, which was 18%. The other popular activities were the least mentioned at 6%. In the second circle, it is clear
while
the percentage of Watching TV figure decreased slightly by 2%, it was still the most common among adults. The new appearance, namely Playing computer games, became the second largest at 27% out of survey results and the traditional one, particularly Talking with friends, had a marginal increase of 5%, from 21% to 26%, standing as the third most common activity.
According to
the data, eating out activity significantly fell down by 15%
whereas
the others proportion was slighter by 4%, from 6% to 2%.
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