Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live Write an email to your friend. In your email 1)Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2)Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3)Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any address Begin your letter as follows Dear,

Dear Pooja, Hope you and your family are doing great. It’s been a long period since our
last
meeting back in India. I am overwhelmed to hear that you are going to pursue the course from the
university
I studied. It would be really great to help you by giving some accommodation tips, as I
initially
planned to stay near to the
university
premises
due to
the fact of an unknown
place
. Post to 6 months after getting a better glance at the
place
and people. I found an affordable
place
which is almost 12 km away from the
university
but the transportation facilities are really good. I would really recommend you to stay with me for at least the initial months till you find a better and more appropriate
place
to live in.
This
would make you less worried about the
place
as you landed,
instead
get on with the
university
, friends and
place
first. If you really look forward to staying somewhere else,
then
I warn you to look carefully at the
place
's amenities and proxy accommodation. Because a lot of foreign students get cheated
due to
these fraud people posting about the accommodation. I am hoping to see you soon, take care. Your friend, Vandana
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