Nowadays it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them placed in amusement parks for the purpose of people’s recreation. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In more recent years, the development of the amusement sector leads humans to relocate some
animals
and plants from their natural Use synonyms
habitats
like the sea to Use synonyms
parks
to fulfilling the request for recreation places. Obviously, I believe that Use synonyms
this
pace might bring some demerits which outweigh the merits.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
this
movement could influence negatively the marine ecosystem because sea creatures play a big role in the food chain, maintaining the ocean life runs well. Linking Words
This
is because each creature has a connection to the others by supplying food and doing mutualism symbiosis. Linking Words
While
showing the Linking Words
animals
and plants in the Use synonyms
parks
could give information to the visitors, expanding human’s understanding of the diversity of creatures, the majority of artificial Use synonyms
habitats
do not appropriate with the natural Use synonyms
habitats
, and the atmospheres lead the Use synonyms
animals
and plants to be stress and effect negatively to their lives. Use synonyms
For example
, in Indonesia, since an increase in the demand for fulfilling the Linking Words
parks
' necessities of the ecosystem, the park parties encourage the unethical pace for relocating some Use synonyms
animals
to the amusement places, driving the beach environment to become unstable.
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In addition
, If the action of moving the marine biota is done massively, it might threaten biodiversity, having a tendency to lose it because giving a chance for human beings to explore and abuse the sea creatures without any consideration generates worse Linking Words
habitats
and ruins the ecological community. Use synonyms
Although
it could allow many workers to have a salary from Linking Words
this
recreation sector, making job opportunities, many zoos appearing prioritizes their income and neglect the condition of the flora and fauna, violating the animal’s right Linking Words
such
as lack of fodder, limited movement, and less treatment by the experts. Linking Words
For instance
, in 2009, japan lost its endemic Linking Words
animals
Use synonyms
such
as Komodo and Orange Frog because it is utilized for showing in public recreation, making their population decline significantly.
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To sum up
, moving ocean flora and fauna from their natural environment to the Linking Words
parks
causes the ecosystem and biodiversity affected negatively, surpassing the advantages of Use synonyms
this
movement.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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