Some people argue that government should spend on their money elderly people care. However, other people say that government should focus more education for young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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small things have their

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rights. It is a common public opinion that

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Authorities should dedicate their money

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old age care.

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Others say that,

government

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give more concentration

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young

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education.

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paragraph, will explain both views and my views and will reach a proper conclusion. In the modern era, Education plays an important role in the development of the world and economy. Youngsters are the future of society. So, the main aim of the

Government

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is to educate the upcoming generation. Nowadays, there

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significant growth in

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education.

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, a survey conducted by the educational board in 2018. There was a drastic change in educated

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. The data showing from the period 2010 to 2016, 95% of Youth attended

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college. But few of them are still not attending their schooling, Not because of their incapability

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of their financial crisis. The majority are from tribal areas. So

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should build more public schools for children and

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, they should control the private school fees. A law should Implement for

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.

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, it is our responsibility is to take care

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people

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elder

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to live

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their family. But

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some circumstances, They should force to leave in

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homes.

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, a bedridden mother needs more attention from

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but

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is not willing to dedicate their time

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person.

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, many adults are not ready to take care

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parents. For them, it is really helpful, if there is

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oldage

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home. So,

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should focus on

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. They should allocate

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amount for

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too.

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, From my point of view, elders and youngsters are equally important to the world. It is

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human need.

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should give importance to Both

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issues. Hopefully, in the

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future

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argument will vanish