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revenue sources expensitures of a USA Charity in one year 2016

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The above chart illustrated funds received and used in the year 2016 from the children’s charity, which is located in the USA.
Overall
, it can be seen that
revenue
 sources talk regarding total donated food
moreover
 expenditure is on
program
 services. In detail, food contribution is 86.6% and
program
 services are 95.8%. These two acts are
further
 extended. Meal help is split into 5 parts,
also
 the project utility is cut into two. Community contribution,
program
revenue
, investment
income
, and government grants
together with
 other
income
 are described under daily bread charity. In facilities Fundraising, management and general are mentioned. Most of the food is donated by community contribution, which is 10.4%.
On the other hand
 fundraising in spending on services is 2.6%.
Program
revenue
 gives away 2.2% of foodstuffs,
also
 the investment
income
along with
 government grants gave the same amount of eatable which is 0.2%.
Last
 but not least other
income
 provided 0.4%. The fundraising value is 26%, and Management and the general payoff is 1.6%. The total
revenue
 sources quotation is $53,561,580
as well as
 total expenditure cost stated is $53,224,896.
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