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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter 1)Correct the information in the article 2) Explain why it is important for the magazine to give the correct information 3) Suggestion what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to let you know about the
article
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 published in your international travel magazine contains
few
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 incorrect
information
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 about the town, where I had born and brought up. The town mentioned
over
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 the
article
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 is Mysore,
it
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is famously know
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 as
heritage
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 city of Karnataka state
as well as
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city
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the city
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 of palaces. But the author of the
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 mentioned it as
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the city
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a city
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city
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a city
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 of toys, which gives
false
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a false
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interpretation
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about
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of
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 the
place
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. It is important to give
right
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the right
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information
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 about the topics chosen for the
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,
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 because people would misinterpret
about
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the
place
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 and the same false
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 would be
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 to the tourist who
are
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 about the visit the
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 and it is
also
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 insulting about the
place
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 by giving incorrect details without knowing and verifying the
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. Being a popular international magazine referred by most
of
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the
tourist
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tourists
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 giving incorrect details would be not bearable. So, would you kindly make
a
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 necessary changes to the
concern
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article
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along with
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 apologies
over
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 the mistake
occurred
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that occurred
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 regarding the incorrect
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 in your next edition
.
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 Thank you for your consideration. And I would be waiting for your reply and changes over you’re next edition. You’re faithfully Vijay
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