Some people spent most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In recent decades it is been observed that
people
are immigrating to a new Use synonyms
place
from where they are born and brought up. But Use synonyms
also
most of them Linking Words
tried
make it up by not shifting to a far distance rather than living in close Add the particle
totried
by
urban areas which gives ease of transportation to the Change preposition
apply
place
where they are born. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
essay
we will be discussing Add a comma
,essay
about
the cause, advantages and disadvantages of living close to our born Remove the preposition
apply
place
.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
this
trend is seen in young professionals who intend to Linking Words
purse
Correct your spelling
pursue
good
Add an article
a good
career
in the professional path. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
This
happens when they attend few educational degrees whose job opportunities demand them to shift to Linking Words
new
Add an article
a new
Use synonyms
place
where they have Fix the agreement mistake
places
high
chance of getting employed. To Add an article
a high
purse
these jobs folks try to get Correct your spelling
pursue
it
at the nearby urban places or places which are very much close to the Correct pronoun usage
them
place
where they were born and Use synonyms
brought-up
. Correct your spelling
brought up
Secondly
, few Linking Words
people
will be shifting from sub-urban or villages to urban areas where there is Use synonyms
better
chance of getting Add an article
a better
quality
education for their offspring to lead Add an article
a quality
good
life in future without losing connection and affection to the Add an article
a good
the good
place
where they are born.
Use synonyms
Consequently
, pros and cons are present in their own ways. As an advantage there will be professional growth and recognition in the field of acquired degree Linking Words
also
, independence of living one’s own life will be acquired Linking Words
along with
exploration Linking Words
to
various opportunities and mingling with Change preposition
of
the
other Correct article usage
apply
people
just like them can lead to Use synonyms
independent
, organized and Replace the word
independence
open minded
lifestyle. Apart from these Add a hyphen
open-minded
pros
there Add a comma
,pros
is
Change the verb form
are
also
cons which Linking Words
needs
to be looked at like Change the verb form
need
homesick
which leads to Replace the word
homesickness
distract
Change the verb form
distracting
ourselves
from having dedication towards the job which is giving bread and butter. These might Correct pronoun usage
us
also
loosen the connection between the family members, Linking Words
cultures
that we Correct word choice
and cultures
were
used Unnecessary verb
apply
it
from the child. Since we are looking into the new world where these values might not be values enough or Correct pronoun usage
apply
they’re
customs would be different.
Correct your spelling
their
To conclude
, Linking Words
although
we face cons in shifting to the nearby Linking Words
place
which can be bear by the advantages that we are looking at. As Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
says
everything comes at Change the verb form
say
cost
, in order to gain something we have to come out of our comfort zone and explore ourselves to bring out the best version of our personality.Add an article
a cost
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