Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email 1)Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2) Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3) Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Pooja, Thanks for asking about my wellness, I am doing good. Hope you are doing well.

Firstly

, congratulations on receiving

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the offer

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offer

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offers

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from the

university

. I believe you will cope

up

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well with

the

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academics and get

a good scores

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a good score

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. Don’t worry about the

accommodation

part as there are plenty of options available and

also

you will find

university

hostels available

initially

for 1 year where you can opt for it. If you didn’t find any good place

initially

. I didn’t

faced

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much

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issues in getting

an good

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good accommodation facilities

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accommodation

facilities as there was my brother who had contacts of his own which helped me in getting a

descent

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decent

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place. I lived nearby around 2kms away from the

university

. The residence was completely filled with basic necessities like groceries, hospitals, theatres, parks, gyms and

what not

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. Everything was available within a radius of 3kms. But to bring you notice amount the cost it was pretty expensive compare to the

accommodation

present at 7kms away from the

university

. Which could be suited

under

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to

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your budget. The best way to search is

through

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apply

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offline

,

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because you will be able to evaluate the facilities given by the owner and

also

you can

have

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negotiation directly with the landlord.

Other part

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would be looking over the post present in the

university

portal under

student

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the student

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section or social media

post

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posts

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like FB,

Instagram

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and Instagram

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. Most

of

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Folks

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would be posting for a roommate to bear the rent amount.

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, you need to be careful if you are looking for

accommodation

through

agency

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an agency

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in

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online. I heard most of them would be

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a scam

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scam

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scams

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just to extract money from your end. Sometimes they post just

room

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a room

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image and pin the location which doesn’t

exists

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exist

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only or else it would be just

room

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a room

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without any kind of facilities present. Without visiting the site by yourself or

ask

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asking

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your friends who already reside near

to

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the place like me to

check-in

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check in

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for the site and validate. Most of them would be using fake agency accounts, numbers where we cannot track them. Once we pay them. But do let me know if you need any help in

such

cases, I would love to be there don’t think as a burden for me. Will be looking forward to

meet

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meeting

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you soon at the alumni function.

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Your

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Yours

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Your

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best friend, Vivek.