The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart illustrates the changes in mean house
prices
of five main cities in different countries from 1990 to 2020. The changes are compared with the average house cost in 1989.
Overall
, in the first half of the decade, two cities showed an increment
of
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the
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price
while
the other countries showed decrement.
Besides
, in the second half of the period, only one city's housing
prices
were reduced
while
rest
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reported a rise. Noticeably, Tokyo's price changes showed the largest change throughout the period In the period of 1990-1995, New York, accounted for
5
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% deduction in average house values, but increased by 5% after 1995.
Similarly
, London reported approximately -7% in the first 5 years and around +12% in the
last
five years compared to 1989.
On the other hand
, Tokyo showed a decrement in the first and second halves of the decade which accounted for -7% and -5% respectively.
Nevertheless
, Madrid and Frankfurt
prices
were
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increased by roughly 2% and 3%
accordingly
, but
this
trend deviated in the next five years; Madrid's resident
prices
rose closer to 4% and Frankfurt's
prices
reduced to 2%.
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