The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients

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The charts illustrate the average proportion of

sodium

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, saturated fat and added sugar in general meals in the USA, all of which probably caused health issues if consumed in huge numbers.

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, the meal that not only contains the highest of three

nutrients

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but

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accounted for the largest amount of

sodium

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is dinner.

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, lunch could categorize as a healthy meal because its proportion has the smallest in all types of

nutrients

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. Dinner is responsible for the greatest quantity of all

nutrients

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,particularly

sodium

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43%, saturated fat 37% and added carbohydrates 23%. The second is snacks which have the biggest volume of added sugar 42% followed by fat and

sodium

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which are 21% and 14% respectively. Lunch is ranked third. It almost consists of two

nutrients

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which are 29% of

sodium

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and 26% of saturated fat. The

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is breakfast. It has the same portion of added sugar and saturated fat (16%) and less than 2% of

sodium

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
Diabetes
Heart disease
Convenience foods
Fast foods
Socioeconomic factors
Lifestyle choices
Healthy eating habits
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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients

Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that other media are better sources of news. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Complain to the manager of a hotel about service quality.

Write a letter to the cinema manager to inform him or her that you have lost your bag in the cinema. In your letter, you should: Tell exactly what happened and when Explain where you think you left the bag Ask the manager to help find your bag

Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?