A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Kushani, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and in the best spirits. I was overjoyed that you asked me about summer camping that you refused to go to in the past. We had our summer camping holiday

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month and it was a fantastic experience for us.

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, I would suggest you visit the same place as it is having picturesque views that you will able to capture.

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, we went to Horton plains and we spent 3 nights there.Authorities arranged all the necessities and made our preparations much easier. The place was very breezy and pleasant to watch.

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, we had problems with insect bites

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which we got skin allergies. So make sure to take repellents with you.

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, as I am currently on my vacation, I would love to join you. So that I can help you with the camping work since

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is your first camping experience. I look forward to your response. Best regards, Salumi

silumidayawardanaFri Feb 24 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

164 words

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adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
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foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
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lasting memories
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