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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both these reviews and give your own opinion.

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The modern world brings about its controversial issues. With immigration being more reachable than ever, many
people
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, including experts, choose
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 path. Discussions are being made on Weather professionals should remain in their countries or they’re allowed to work in the
country
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 of their wishing. On
one
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 hand, those against immigration of experts, believe that
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 should assume a job where they received their education because they are indebted to their society. Their
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 invested in their education, and they are obliged to commit to their
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 by working there. Another point
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 often mentioned, is that it's every educated person’s human duty to contribute to the growth and prosperity of less privileged parts of society. Take a young physician that returns to their hometown and practices medicine there. From a logical point of view,
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 must be their ultimate motive.
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, a large number of
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 believe that skilled workers are free to pursue a career abroad. They argue that if we believe in human rights, which we must, freedom to live where
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 chooses is part of it, and
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, professionals aren’t obliged to work in their
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 of origin. Aside from that,
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 might ask the question that, why should someone who has worked hard to get a degree in a respective field, settle for a lower income when they can get an extravagant compensation package in a different part of the world?
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 coming from developing countries are textbook examples of
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 issue.
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, I believe
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 are ultimately free to choose where they want to live and work, and
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 some claims to bounding
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 to their motherland may seem plausible, in the end,
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 are free to choose for themselves.
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