Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days more and more patients who

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from a certain health condition are trying to evade consulting their doctor by taking different medicines and therapies. I believe that

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kind of behaviour can be extremely dangerous, especially without

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. In

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essay, I'm going to express why I'm against these types of practices. First of all, most

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chemical medicines are

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swords. Changing your medications without a proper medical evaluation might have serious consequences. Take

for example

, allergic shocks, which can be fatal, are developed mostly when administrating random medicines. So, sticking to the prescriptions written by the doctor isn't a game it's a life matter.

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, sometimes patients with untreatable illnesses rush to a wide range of therapies out of desperation. Despite

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I don't mind sticking to hope, but sometimes it worsens the situation

instead

of treating it. Many cases, of what's called alternative medicine are not yet to be trusted by scholars and

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no proven positive outcome

such

as, chiropractors. Their main source of income is people who fear visiting the clinic for

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potential possibility of being sick.

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of the comfort it provides, it could be a

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delusion

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that hides more serious problems and delays the delivery of the real treatment. In conclusion,

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phenomenon of patients trying to tackle their medical situations on

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own and away from doctors is increasing rapidly. With the random administration of different drugs and seeking in unsafe ways. I strongly refuse

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