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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. You have not yet met the neighbor. Write a letter to the new neighbour. In your letter: • explain the situation • describe why it bothers you • suggest a solution

#apartment #year #neighbour #noise #neighbor #situation
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to
complaint
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complain
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complaint
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about
noise
 which
is came
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comes
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form
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from
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 your apartment. It is my
last
 year
to live
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living
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 in
this
 apartment. Please do not make
noise
 at least before leaving
this
 apartment because you
are
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disturb me especially when I am working or sleeping.
Noise
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The noise
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 of music
disturb
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disturbs
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 me as it is easy
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to disturb
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disturb
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disturbs
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 me. After hearing the almost all time I will try to sing and forget my job. Please
setting
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 up
special
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 product which
is not allow
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 to make a
noise
.
Also
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 you can make
volume
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the volume
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 lower. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully,
Mr.
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Mr
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George
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