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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapaers or books because they will be to read everything they want online without paying. to what do you extent agree or disagree with this statment ?

#future #nobody #newspapaers #books #statment
The diagram illustrates the
procces
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process
 of generating electricity from a hydroelectric
power
 station.
Overall
, the
water
of
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from
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river
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the river
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go
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goes
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 inside pipes to a generator ,which is containing
a reversible turbines
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reversible turbines
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,
electricity
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and electricity
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come
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comes
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 out from it to
power
 lines. in the contrast, the whole process is reversed at night .
To begin
 ,in the day
water
 are being kept behind a dam where it reaches
high
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a high
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 level
then
 it
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is alowed
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alowed
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allowed
 to flow throw pipes into
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the generater
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generater
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generator
 situated in
power
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a power
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 station.The generator ,
begin
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begins
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 to work when the
water
 moves the turbines ,and electricity
are
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is
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 being
tarnsported
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transported
 throw
power
 lines to the national grid.
in
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On
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 the other hand, the process is completely reversed at night because the
water
 in
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the low
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low level
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low-level
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 reservoir
are
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 being pumped by the same generator since its turbines are reversible in their motion .
Additionally
,
water
 flows throw it to
high level
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high-level
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 reservoir
water
 .
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