The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the popularity of leisure venues

such

sports

, theme parks and cinemas,

while

the table presents the costs of attending these venues in 2009.

Overall

, the movie

theaters

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theatres

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enjoyed the widest

attendence

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attendance

levels, in

oppose

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opposition

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sports

that were the least visited.

However

, in the case of admission prices,

sports

games are the most expensive, in

comparation

Correct your spelling

comparison

to cinemas that were the most

financialy

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financially

accessible. Over 1000 people visited a cinema in 2009. Theme Parks experienced much lower

attendence

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attendance

at less than 400.

Lastly

Sports

events attracted roughly 175 fans. The prices for 1 ticket for a

fotball

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football

game were within a range of 71 - 75 dollars and were significantly higher than for the other

sports

For example

, to attend a

cricet

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cricket

game one had to pay only 24 dollars. A

single use

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single-use

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ticket for cinemas

costed

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cost

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only 15 dollars,

thus

labeling

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labelling

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it as the cheapest free time activity. Moving on to the family tickets, we can notice that the outlay on a group ticket

were

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was

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almost identical to 4 one-off tickets in the case of

sports

games.

On the other hand

, theme parks and cinema family tickets priced at 210 and 55 respectively, offered

much

Correct article usage

a much

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better group

discount

Fix the agreement mistake

discounts

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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