An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • say how you feel about the visit? • suggest what you could do on his/her birthday? • ask what your friend thinks of your idea? Write at least 150 words

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Dear John, Hope you are in good health and spirit. I am ecstatic to know that you will pay me a visit in the second week of next month and the reason for the same is not just your visit but your birthday as well because it will fall under the same week. It has been a long time since we met and celebrated our special occasions together. As you know, we have a few more college friends residing here in Canada, I would like to throw a party for you on that day and invite them as well. I want to make

this

birthday and tour even more special for all of us.

Although

I am really sure that

this

idea will excite you a lot, I would still like to have your opinion on it. Keep me updated if you have any other plans for your birthday. Warm wishes, Jenny Ross

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