Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, a debate regarding art

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in school emerged.

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, some people argue that

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, music and drama are more important than other

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,

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school schedules should reserve more

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for them. I partially disagree with

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they have plenty of

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and other

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are equally or more important. In

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essay, a brief explanation of the matter will be given. It is undoubtedly true that artistic

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are important in children's growth.

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first exposure to fine

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can develop in someone some sensibility to them, which can be the start of a career in the

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industry.

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, many artists stated that their interest started during the first steps of their education.

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, some studies suggest that

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can help create mental flexibility, a skill more and more required nowadays in every work position. Given all

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, it is not entirely inaccurate to advocate for the increase of

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given to music, drama and similar matters.

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, the importance of other teachings cannot be

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. In fact,

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as mathematics or language studies are at least as important as

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and pupils do not have many occasions to practice them as they do in schools.

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can be pursued more easily during free

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, as can be seen by the fact that many people have a form of art as a hobby,

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is more difficult for

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like mathematics.

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, in some countries, schools already provide additional

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for fine

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with optional activities outside the normal schedule. In conclusion, I disagree with the idea of giving more space to art, music or drama in spite of other

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. As stated above, the other

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are important too, and if anything, they are the ones who need more

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, because it is difficult to come in contact with them outside educational systems. For all these reasons, school schedules should not be changed in favour of the

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