you recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. you want to tell him how you feel. write a letter to the singer: - say how you feel about his performance - give details of your musical activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
I am writing
this
letter to tell you my impression of the festival where you played the guitar.
Firstly
, I am a big fan of yours and I follow you on Social Media platforms. When I saw the advertisement 0f your concert, I bought a ticket immediately. I was amazed by your performance. Moreover
, I believe that is
amazing to play the guitar while
singing.
Secondly
, since I was a teenager I have seen you as my role model, so I enroll my name in the musical school and I play the guitar in many celebrations. My goal is to become a professional musician like you in close future; however
, I do not know do I have enough talent or not. Accordingly
I would like you to see the CD that I send with Add a comma
,Accordingly
this
letter and tell me about my talent, as well as
; how can I enhance my talent
I look forward to hearing beneficial advice from you.
Mohammad JeddiniaSubmitted by mohammad.jeddinia on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.