Do you believe that scientific experimentation on animals is justified? Are there any alternatives to animal experimentation?

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In my point of view experimentation on
animals
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is bad
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, In important discoveries can be made from
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.
Animals
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have life.
Animals
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need to take extra care When
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are used for the dossier. We are going through the worst pandemic. Scientists are still searching for vaccines to come out of
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pandemic. In
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on the human body. so the alternative option is
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. In my opinion,
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conducted on
animals
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might kill them or they will suffer till the
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breath.
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after conducting the experiment, need to take care of the
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of killing them or letting them go. In the current ,situation I don't see any alternatives to conduct the
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. Doing
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on trees or any other plants is not helpful. The reaction of
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experiments
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can be only seen on the human body or
animals
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. Compare to
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, the human body has high value.
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, new developments done in medical science,
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it has to be made sure
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safe for use. As testing of
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is mandatory.
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, doing
experiments
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directly on humans or
animals
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is unethical. It is not that we need to stop experimenting with new developments
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we should look for an alternative solution like developing artificial software which will provide us with the perfect human subject on the computer. In conclusion, change is a necessary part of our life, in order to survive and keep experimenting with new things.
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