The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period

The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period
The chart gives information about the Ashdown Museum, comparing the total number of visitors and their satisfaction level before and after refurbishment. Before doing innovation, nearly 74000 people were visiting the park.a survey conducted showed that 40 per
cent
were dissatisfied
while
only 30 per
cent
has been satisfied,with a few very satisfied customers.
Remaining
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The remaining
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either did not show interest in participating or were very dissatisfied After the renovations were done, there was an upgrade of business which is very clear as
additionally
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20000 showed up compared to the past. reports collected have seen that nearly 75 per
cent
were happy as they were either satisfied or very satisfied . in the rest of the quarter people, 15 per
cent
were not happy. in conclusion, by Changing the look theMuesuem has made it uphill which is evident as they attracted more visitors and more per
cent
of people are happy with the scenery and services provided as per the survey.
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