You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago, but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take.

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Dear Sir, I hope

this

letter finds you! I am writing

this

letter to express my utter disappointment with your customer service. I, Kanisha Patel, rented a hyundai elantra car, two weeks ago for a month. My booking reference number is 1234. You can find all details in it. I would like to draw your attention that AC is not working at all and my family and I are facing many troubles

due to

this

. The day after I booked the car, the air conditioner stopped working. At the time of the inspection, I raised my concern but one of your staff members mentioned that it is a minor problem and I will not face any trouble

due to

it. Now, I regrate my decision on trusting him.

Apart from

this

, after calling customer care they assured me that they would fix the air conditioner within 2 days, but no one has contacted me since

then

. I would like you to take strict action on

this

. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Kanisha Patel

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

178 words

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You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago, but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages

All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects oth children and adults. What are the reasons and solutions?

k should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend.

Writing Task 1 - you are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation.

Some people believe that in near future, the role of teachers will be diminished and they will be replaced by robots and AI. To what extent do you agree?