You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago, but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take.

#car #company #air #conditioner #week #situation #action

Dear Sir, I hope

this

letter finds you! I am writing

this

letter to express my utter disappointment with your customer service. I, Kanisha Patel, rented a hyundai elantra car, two weeks ago for a month. My booking reference number is 1234. You can find all details in it. I would like to draw your attention that AC is not working at all and my family and I are facing many troubles

due to

this

. The day after I booked the car, the air conditioner stopped working. At the time of the inspection, I raised my concern but one of your staff members mentioned that it is a minor problem and I will not face any trouble

due to

it. Now, I regrate my decision on trusting him.

Apart from

this

, after calling customer care they assured me that they would fix the air conditioner within 2 days, but no one has contacted me since

then

. I would like you to take strict action on

this

. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Kanisha Patel

Submitted by Neel Patel on Sat Feb 25 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

178 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago, but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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