There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems are Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
to complain about the bus servicing, especially in
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settlement. First of all, I have to mention that I am a regular traveller on your reputable bus lines, but the
last
time I had a bad experience with it. The driver was not welcoming at all ,
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he was careless
while
driving and it was dangerous as I thought that he would have some accidents, but luckily we are well. He made me take the worst trip in my life so I request replacing
this
driver with someone who is careful with the life he has. At least you have to put a penalty on him to remember how bad he was. Yours faithfully, Serag Mouni
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