some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Some individuals argue that parents should support

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young adults to participate in group

activities

in their leisure time

while

other people oppose

this

view and want

children

to learn

while

staying on their own.

However

, I agree with the view of

participanting

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participating

in groups and

this

essay will discuss the possible reasons for both of the views.

To begin

with, parents want their

children

to get comfortable with

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surroundings. And,the only way to develop

this

habit is to encourage their young ones to actively participate in teams, owing to

this

,

such

activities

not only

helps

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to become sociable but

also

fosters

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foster

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physical and mental growth.

For example

, playing football together helps

peer

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peers

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to perform well in a team.

Besides

this

, certain

activities

like doing theatre with

the

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other artists

benefits

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individuals to sharpen their conservation skills.

On the contrary

side, some people do not agree with the view and want their

children

to learn things on their own rather

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groups. The primary reason behind

this

perspective is that they do not want their kids to get suffer from depression. As, in groups, competitions between young peers

leads

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to some stressful situations and often seen that

children

get easily

frustrate

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with their family members as well.

Moreover

, these events can have a huge impact on mental health. The survey conducted by

health

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organisation

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states that around 57

percent

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of young ones developed

jealously

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and frustration towards their fellow mates because of competition between them.

To conclude

,

although

participating in

the

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group

activities

can lead to competitive nature between mates, one can easily become

sociable

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person and

also

develop communication skills.