These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particulary in secondry school. What are the reasons for this and how could the problem be solved.

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. It is a respected job
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numerous countries face
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problem lacking
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teachers
in secondary school , people do not want to be specialised in teaching
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,well there are several facts behind it and I give a brief solution to overcome
this
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no
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teachers
due to
the trend of technology everyone should choose IT sectors and the number of
teachers
declined drastically.
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salaries provide to young
teachers
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heavy workloads so they do not manage
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time for others person things . As result,
teachers
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inconvenience
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line
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, some
teachers
are
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frustrated
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students
do not follow obeys rules and make
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would be difficult for
teacher
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to control the situation.
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approach
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to bring change in society government have a provide sufficient salaries and increase their importance among
community
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so that more and more
students
should dream to follow
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line
.For ,instance, is consider that
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teachers
face work overload in private
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institutions
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it would be solved by
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convinence
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convenience
and
reliableness
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for them.
Thus
, local authorities need to look part in it , organing various create camps so that
students
and
teachers
build
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relationship
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and respect their elders .
last
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do not obey rules and restrict
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them . For, instance, in many developed countries collect fines
students
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breaking laws to irritate
teachers
. In conclusion, there are some reasons why
teachers
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in secondary schooling .
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problems can
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their
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salaries ,
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workload and
provide
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the
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facilities to
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the
teachers
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life .
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