These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particulary in secondry school. What are the reasons for this and how could the problem be solved.
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problem lacking Change the article
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teachers
in secondary school , people do not want to be specialised in teaching line
,well there are several facts behind it and I give a brief solution to overcome this
complication in the essay.
First and foremost, there are
no Correct subject-verb agreement
is
such
importance of an
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apply
teachers
due to
the trend of technology everyone should choose IT sectors and the number of teachers
declined drastically. Secondly
, the main reason of
it is Change preposition
for
low
salaries provide to young Correct article usage
the low
teachers
along with
heavy workloads so they do not manage the
time for others person things . As result, Change the word
their
teachers
are demolished day by day for, example, in Japanese University resulted that more than educated people choose other opportunities although
, of
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inconvenience
in Correct article usage
an inconvenience
teaching
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the teaching
line
.Therfore
, some Correct your spelling
Therefore
teachers
are fasturated
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frustrated
students
do not follow obeys rules and make anarchary
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anarchy
This
,
would be difficult for Remove the comma
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teacher
to control the situation.
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a teacher
the teacher
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has a key, there are Correct your spelling
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possible
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a possible
the possible
approach
to bring change in society government have a provide sufficient salaries and increase their importance among Fix the agreement mistake
approaches
community
so that more and more Add an article
the community
students
should dream to follow teaching
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the teaching
line
.For ,instance, is consider that,
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teachers
face work overload in private instituties
it would be solved by Correct your spelling
institutions
institutes
provide
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providing
convinence
and Correct your spelling
convenience
reliableness
for them. Replace the word
reliability
Thus
, local authorities need to look part in it , organing various create camps so that students
and teachers
build strong
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a strong
relationship
and respect their elders .Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
last
but not least government took strict action among
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against
who
do not obey rules and restrict Correct pronoun usage
those who
to
them . For, instance, in many developed countries collect fines Change preposition
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students
breaking laws to irritate Change preposition
for students
teachers
.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why teachers
do not participating
in secondary schooling . Change the verb form
participate
However
, this
problems can Correct determiner usage
these
be solve
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be solved
beacuse
of Correct your spelling
because
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their
salaries ,Correct pronoun usage
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workload and Wrong verb form
declining
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the
facilities to Correct article usage
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improve
teachers
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