The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period

The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period
The table and pie charts compare the outcome of surveys about how satisfied
visitors
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the number of
visitors
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at Ashdown Museum during the
year
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before and after renovation.
overall
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, it is clearly observed that the number of
visitors
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to the museum increases dramatically after the refurbishment process, and
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to the satisfaction consequences after the
year
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,refurbishment the percentage of satisfied have grown slightly. Starting with, the
visitors
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' proportion during the pre-renovation at solely 74,000 people. Interestingly, post-renovation climb up to 18,000 or 92,000 people. With regard to, satisfaction consequences show a significant change throughout the time frame. As the result, it is can be seen that the percentage of dissatisfied decline considerably in the
year
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after refurbishment from 40% to only 15%. On the other ,hand the very satisfied sector is the vast majority of proportion in the
year
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after renovation accounting for 35% and followed by satisfied, and dissatisfied, at 40% an

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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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