The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates an area proposal for building a new shopping mall in the
city
of Brandfield by city
planners. There are two sites under consideration, located in the northeast and the southeast of the city
.
The first possible site
for shopping mall construction, S1, is just north of the city
center
and above the railway line, which runs from the southeast to the northwest. If it is built here, it will be convenient for the residents living in the town Change the spelling
centre
center
and a large housing area next to the Change the spelling
centre
site
. There is also
a river passing through the city
, across the city
center
, near the construction Change the spelling
centre
site
, S1, from the southwest to the north.
The site
in the southeast, S2, is also
situated by the railway and relatively close to the city
center
. Change the spelling
centre
However
, an industrial zone located in the vicinity of this
site
might be noisy for customers. There is a road that runs through the city
and is close to both sites; thus
, transportation is beneficial for either location. A substantial golf course and park west of the city
prevents this
area from being available as a site
.Submitted by Hein Htet Aung
on
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