The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of

Brandfield.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates an area proposal for building a new shopping mall in the
city
of Brandfield by
city
planners. There are two sites under consideration, located in the northeast and the southeast of the
city
. The first possible
site
for shopping mall construction, S1, is just north of the
city
center
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and above the railway line, which runs from the southeast to the northwest. If it is built here, it will be convenient for the residents living in the town
center
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and a large housing area next to the
site
. There is
also
a river passing through the
city
, across the
city
center
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, near the construction
site
, S1, from the southwest to the north. The
site
in the southeast, S2, is
also
situated by the railway and relatively close to the
city
center
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.
However
, an industrial zone located in the vicinity of
this
site
might be noisy for customers. There is a road that runs through the
city
and is close to both sites;
thus
, transportation is beneficial for either location. A substantial golf course and park west of the
city
prevents
this
area from being available as a
site
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, site, center with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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