The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Given is a flow graph depicting how to present reliable weather forecasts from up-to-the-minute information at the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. It is obvious that the diagram can be separated into four major parts, collecting
datas
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data
,analyzing,preparing and soon
broadcast
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broadcasting
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. Looking closely at
this
picture, the incoming information is detected from
satellite
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satellites
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,
radar
and drifting buoys. The
radar
supports satellite, which creates data that
are
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is
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analyzed and forecasted to satellite photos.
Moreover
, the
radar
itself shows the map of the weather on
radar
screens and
also
draws the synoptic chart .
This
line chart can be provided by a drifting buoy too. Prior to the broadcast , the maps,photos or charts are done and transferred to the computer as well.After preparing all the details, broadcasting is ready . There are several ways and tools
such
as TV newsreaders, radio and recorded announcements
according to
the graph.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words radar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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