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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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There have been competing views on whether
age
 constraints should be imposed on citizens who
drink
 or not. In my opinion, there should be strict policies on the legal
age
 for drinking in order to curb behavioural misconduct and its associated effects. On the one hand, a
society
 without strict legal ages at which members of the
society
 can
drink
 provides citizens with a sense of freedom to make their choices on the various types of
drink
 they want irrespective of their
age
 and
this
 has a positive effect on the rate at which people buy drinks thereby, increasing the income of people selling these products and the country's economy.
Conversely
, some of these people are unable to
drink
 healthily and cautiously which is highly detrimental to their health, finance, career, relationship and future.
On the other hand
, countries with strict legal ages at which members of
society
 can
drink
 which is usually an
age
 restriction for
children
 below 18 years who are not permitted to take alcoholic drinks usually make
such
 restrictions in other to protect
children
 from inappropriate drinking
due to
 peer pressure, inability to make right choices
due to
 immaturity, curiosity or bad influences.
Therefore
, reducing the rate of juvenile delinquency and its associated risk
such
 as; truancy, drug addiction, alcoholism, rape,high school dropouts or thugs can affect their academics, health, future and
society
 as a whole.
For instance
, law restrictions in countries prohibiting the sales of alcoholic drinks to
children
 under 18 has cubbed the drinking of alcohol among teenagers thereby, reducing behavioural misconduct among adolescent in schools and increasing their zeal to learn which result in academic excellence and a reduction of crime rate in the
society
. In conclusion, whilst some countries feel that there shouldn't be a strict legal
age
 at which members of humanity can
drink
 in other give citizens a sense of freedom, I believe it's best to implement legal
age
 restrictions on drinking in other to protect
children
 under 18 years till they are matured to make right decisions independently without been influenced by others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Legal drinking age
  • Underage drinking
  • Health repercussions
  • Addiction
  • Drunk-driving
  • Responsible drinking
  • Forbidden fruit
  • Social rituals
  • Public health
  • Safety framework
  • Risks of alcohol
  • Cultural differences
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