Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, a

country

is considered developed and prosperous when it has many skyscrapers in big cities.

However

, many

people

suggest that we should use that money for schools and

hospitals

instead

of building impressive

buildings

.

This

indicates that the government has to consider carefully and develop both areas equally.

Besides

the beautiful natural scenery, modern

buildings

are

also

one of the

concers

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concerns

concerts

of tourists when coming to your

country

.

For instance

, Landmark or Bitexco in Ho Chi Minh City with unique architecture and luxury have made visitors want to explore.

In addition

, tall

buildings

are

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not only

to

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impress

people

but

it

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also

provides more accommodations for citizens when the population tends to increase in big cities.

Nevertheless

, if solely focusing on developing

buildings

while

neglecting other problems

such

as improving schools or

hospitals

in remote places, it will cause severe consequences for the

country

in the future. Even so,

buildings

have brought a lot of profit for the government so they can use it to solve those issues.

On the other hand

, a majority of

people

claim that improving education and

hospitals

is necessary more than building skyscrapers.

For example

, many successful entrepreneurs not only spend money on investments, but they

also

use it to help poor

people

to improve their lives through actions like building more schools and

hospitals

. When they have education and health, they will become a helpful person and

the

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future owners of the

country

, helping the

country

thrive. In conclusion, the construction of modern

buildings

is an important thing but

improvement

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of education and health is equally important.

Therefore

, the government should consider

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to develop

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the

country

in

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positive

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direction.